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PostSubject: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:20 am

Would you like to see some really good feedback?
This is the post for you!
The purpose of this thread is to get your music heared, and more important get some really good feedback.

How it works: Once every 2-3 days i will chose one person from the ones who gave good feedback on the song posted here.
The person that i choose will be the one who gave the best feedback, and i will search for one of his latest tracks, put it in the begin post here so you can all find the current 'feedback song' easy.
I think people will really give you good feedback, since they got a change of getting even better back.

If you have anymore questions feel free to ask, the first one who posts anything in this topic will have his track as the begin song!

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Current song to give feedback on: [/strike]
http://soundcloud.com/sf4life13/sf4life13-eternal-hatred
Will choose next song in: 3 days.


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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:02 am

Here we go!
What do you guys think about this track? I'm working on a new version (re-edit) for a better masterization ya know Wink Dunnot give attentions about the vocals, because they are not impressives Smile

http://soundcloud.com/djthyrexx/blacksun-of-paradise

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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:10 am

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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:27 am

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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:29 am

DjThyrexx wrote:
Here we go!
What do you guys think about this track? I'm working on a new version (re-edit) for a better masterization ya know Wink Dunnot give attentions about the vocals, because they are not impressives Smile

http://soundcloud.com/djthyrexx/blacksun-of-paradise


It sounds oldschool. I like theese tones. But also i would like to see re-edited version xD. Get it done dude and show us what amazing DJ you are! Very Happy (lil' incentive?)
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:32 am

Electrice wrote:
Feedback on these two?

http://soundcloud.com/theofficialelectrice/right-behind-you-original-mix

http://soundcloud.com/theofficialelectrice/get-them-baddies-original-mix

Wow. Interesting sounds. But in my own opinion sometimes theese sounds are to dry, to much distorted.
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:53 am

MNO wrote:
Electrice wrote:
Feedback on these two?

http://soundcloud.com/theofficialelectrice/right-behind-you-original-mix

http://soundcloud.com/theofficialelectrice/get-them-baddies-original-mix

Wow. Interesting sounds. But in my own opinion sometimes theese sounds are to dry, to much distorted.

Thanks man, I'll try to get them a bit more... Normal.
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PostSubject: New track JesseAdjomo - Funk This    Tue Apr 17, 2012 12:08 pm

New track JesseAdjomo - Funk This
Feedback away!

http://soundcloud.com/jesse-adjomo/jesseadjomo-funk-this
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 1:20 pm

A nice trick to thicken bass/synths is to make 3 copies of the instrament then eq/filter it in this fashon.

1st- cut all highs and mids, want this to be the lows, stay away from too many FX keep it mostly clean and centered.

2nd- this one eq/filter the highs and lows out (make it the mids) this is a good spot to play around with stereo separation/chorus aswell as flangers/phasers and other effects, reverb and such

3rd- eq/filter out the lows and mids (make this your highs) keep this centered as it will be the most heared of the 3. good spot for your distortion and any other simple FX that doesnt sepirate the sound.

Again this is just a trick i use to thicken up any sound works well with basses/reese sounds. hope this helps alot. Leave some "Feedback" if this helps you.
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 2:25 pm

TeknikalGroove wrote:
A nice trick to thicken bass/synths is to make 3 copies of the instrament then eq/filter it in this fashon.

1st- cut all highs and mids, want this to be the lows, stay away from too many FX keep it mostly clean and centered.

2nd- this one eq/filter the highs and lows out (make it the mids) this is a good spot to play around with stereo separation/chorus aswell as flangers/phasers and other effects, reverb and such

3rd- eq/filter out the lows and mids (make this your highs) keep this centered as it will be the most heared of the 3. good spot for your distortion and any other simple FX that doesnt sepirate the sound.

Again this is just a trick i use to thicken up any sound works well with basses/reese sounds. hope this helps alot. Leave some "Feedback" if this helps you.

I have some doubts about your 1st saying about letting low freq for a synth sound.
By letting low feq in you synths they can interfere with the kick and bass.
Let the bass and kick guide the low eq thats mine method, all remaining sounds doesen't need low eq...so just cut away.
Feedback on this is welcome
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 6:46 pm

I wholeheartedly agree with that, there is a whole other discussion on mastering and correct placement of the sound frequencies. I just mean lows in general of any instrument, of course playing around with the right frequency of cuts/filters is part of the learning curve.
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:51 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:28 pm

I am really liking this one. I'm listening through headphones, so my feedback may not be the most helpful, so I apologize if anything I say really doesn't help :/

1. The filter for the transitions around 0:40 and has a little to much resonance to it. It doesn't need to be turned out extremely, but just slightly adjusted.

2. The mids and highs seem a little low. Give it a little boost around 7-800 hz and around 6000 to 8000hz.

3. The bassline seems a little muddy. For a bass, I'd say either slightly turn the volume down, or slightly take out a little of the bass in the master eq. If you haven't done so, I'd also add a 20 hz cut, and slowly turn the frequency up from 20 hz until it sounds a little cleaner.

I hope this helps. If not, then I apologize. Great song though! Definitely following you now. Cant wait to see more Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Wed Apr 18, 2012 9:05 am

Starting Producers wrote:
The feedback song for today is:

http://soundcloud.com/djthyrexx/blacksun-of-paradise

Very nice track, i'm not the biggest fan of trance, but bro you got what it takes to make energetic tune. I didn't noticed when I started swing to the beat. And from today you will have one more fan. Good luck mate.
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Wed Apr 18, 2012 9:44 am

@sf4life13 Thx a lot for your "equalizing" comment hahha Smile I'll try all that! Thx!
And to be honest, when I did that track I didn't know anything about real good equalization haha


@EgyChord Thx man great comment!
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Wed Apr 18, 2012 4:20 pm

DjThyrexx wrote:
@sf4life13 Thx a lot for your "equalizing" comment hahha Smile I'll try all that! Thx!
And to be honest, when I did that track I didn't know anything about real good equalization haha
No worries Very Happy
It's okay lol I didn't even bother adding eq's to any of my songs up until about a year ago, and I'm still learning lol
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Wed Apr 18, 2012 4:30 pm

http://soundcloud.com/theofficialelectrice/keep-up-original-mix

This isn't really good, but i need help still.
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback topic   Wed Apr 18, 2012 4:52 pm

Electrice wrote:
http://soundcloud.com/theofficialelectrice/keep-up-original-mix

This isn't really good, but i need help still.

good song but idk what it needs but good in all
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PostSubject: Check this out   Thu May 31, 2012 2:18 pm

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PostSubject: I have to join this :D   Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:14 am

I have been making music for over a year now and i am currently working in logic pro so if you guys wanna collab I am down!

Please give me some constructive feedback on my new track http://soundcloud.com/dj-magic-bass/id-martin-saethren-youtube

If you would suport me please like my facebookpage Smile

https://www.facebook.com/MartinSaethren
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