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Cendrim
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PostSubject: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sat Apr 14, 2012 6:33 am

Hey guys im new to Starting Producers and im glad and proud to be in it. This is a very nice community. Well lets get to the point check out some of my tracks enjoy Smile
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim
Thanks for your time
-Cendrim

Made another track here
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim/david-puentez-ft-max-c-things




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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sat Apr 14, 2012 8:52 am

Hey dude, i listened to your songs and first off all:
Call me: AWESOME CHORDS.

Really great! Muchhh love! I really like it! But of course you want to know what i think you should improve, so:

It is a bit boring to listen to, you should change something. Everything between 1:01-1:18 should be made a little bit quicker, because that is when i think scratch After that it begins to sound cool again. Also you should change the end, it is a little bit random. Like im listening to the music when suddenly BAM the music stops Sad
Overall: 8/10!
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:02 am

thanks man and ill try to change it up a bit
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:46 am

Working on the track it will be up in a min
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:53 am

here it is my reloaded track on call me
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim/cendrim-call-me-reloaded
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:49 pm

check out another one of my songs short version
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim/mr-saxobeat-cendrim-remix
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys check out my tracks.   Sun Apr 15, 2012 2:27 am

I think what Derp thought - correct me if I'm wrong - saying that you should put more variations in your track was about the main melody, because it's just the same riff with different synths playing it!

I suggest you to take a progressive track you love from a known producer (Levels - Avicii, Deadmau5 tracks or even Resurrection - Axwell's Re-Cut Club Version), put it in your DAW software and try to see the track's construction; how many bars for the main parts, where does breakdown drops etc...
Then you'll have a more structured track!

- Brasart.
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